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	:'''tt11:''' Hey, at least I didn't have to do it, I'm pretty sure Vanilla Ice would sound more authentic than me. On that topic: "''Y, who witnessed the showdown:''". I'm kind of confused about what this is, is it still part of the reporter's writing, or the biker talking? I don't get what the Y in there is supposed to be. --[[User:Ephyon\|Ephyon]] 10:50, 6 September 2010 (CDT)		:'''tt11:''' Hey, at least I didn't have to do it, I'm pretty sure Vanilla Ice would sound more authentic than me. On that topic: "''Y, who witnessed the showdown:''". I'm kind of confused about what this is, is it still part of the reporter's writing, or the biker talking? I don't get what the Y in there is supposed to be. --[[User:Ephyon\|Ephyon]] 10:50, 6 September 2010 (CDT)
	It's like a "codename" or whatnot to protect the identity of the person talking, like how tt07 had "Citizen A". However, unlike tt07, tt11 doesn't describe the speaker at all (although it's obvious what he is based on his dialogue), it simply says that he witnessed the confrontation. --[[User:Arlen\|Arlen]] 12:05, 6 September 2010 (CDT)		It's like a "codename" or whatnot to protect the identity of the person talking, like how tt07 had "Citizen A". However, unlike tt07, tt11 doesn't describe the speaker at all (although it's obvious what he is based on his dialogue), it simply says that he witnessed the confrontation. --[[User:Arlen\|Arlen]] 12:05, 6 September 2010 (CDT)
		+	:'''ei270.txt, line 478:''' Not quite getting the meaning of the first part here, "''That someone else understands,'' it's a complicated feeling...". Having someone else understand gives a complicated feeling? It's a complicated feeling for someone else to understand? --[[User:Ephyon\|Ephyon]] 22:05, 6 September 2010 (CDT)

	== September 5 ==		== September 5 ==

The Devil on G-String:g43.ks

2010-09-07T02:46:19Z

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	;;　うっすらと目を細める。[l]昔を懐かしむように。[l]甘い女の子だ。[wvl]		;;　うっすらと目を細める。[l]昔を懐かしむように。[l]甘い女の子だ。[wvl]
	;;I presume this is about Yuki since I don't see an imouto or mizuha in there anywhere, and the current POV is Yuki. - pondr		;;I presume this is about Yuki since I don't see an imouto or mizuha in there anywhere, and the current POV is Yuki. - pondr
		+	;;I'd say it's referring to Mizuha, as in 甘い女の子だ is Yuki's thoughts and not narration.
	Snapping out of it, Yuki suddenly posed a question to her sister.[wvl]		Snapping out of it, Yuki suddenly posed a question to her sister.[wvl]
	;;　不意に聞いてやった。[wvl]		;;　不意に聞いてやった。[wvl]
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	[nm t="ユキ" s=yuk_7773]「Of course I do,」 [wveh]Yuki said as her eyes snapped open. [l][nm t="ユキ" s=yuk_7774]「This revenge is premeditated, not some pathetic act of passion. The hate and resentment I bear for that man doesn't fade away; it simmers, purifies itself, and grows stronger and stronger.」[np]		[nm t="ユキ" s=yuk_7773]「Of course I do,」 [wveh]Yuki said as her eyes snapped open. [l][nm t="ユキ" s=yuk_7774]「This revenge is premeditated, not some pathetic act of passion. The hate and resentment I bear for that man doesn't fade away; it simmers, purifies itself, and grows stronger and stronger.」[np]
	;;[nm t="ユキ" s=yuk_7773]「当たり前でしょう」[wveh]ユキは目を見開いた。[l][nm t="ユキ" s=yuk_7774]「いっときの感情に身を任せて復讐しているわけじゃないの。あいつに対する恨みと憎しみは、時がたつにつれて消えるどころか、どんどん強くなっていったわ」[np]		;;[nm t="ユキ" s=yuk_7773]「当たり前でしょう」[wveh]ユキは目を見開いた。[l][nm t="ユキ" s=yuk_7774]「いっときの感情に身を任せて復讐しているわけじゃないの。あいつに対する恨みと憎しみは、時がたつにつれて消えるどころか、どんどん強くなっていったわ」[np]
		+	;;purifies isn't really a word I'd want to use when talking about negative stuff, seems to give a clashing image.

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	;;　水羽の返答はなかった。幼かった水羽は覚えていないようだが、ユキはいまでも思い出す。[l]血の混じった咳をして、ユキになんでもないと笑って見せた母の顔を。[wvl]		;;　水羽の返答はなかった。幼かった水羽は覚えていないようだが、ユキはいまでも思い出す。[l]血の混じった咳をして、ユキになんでもないと笑って見せた母の顔を。[wvl]
	;;are we sure this is pneumonia and not tuberculosis/consumption? coughing blood in literature is usually tuberculosis. - pondr		;;are we sure this is pneumonia and not tuberculosis/consumption? coughing blood in literature is usually tuberculosis. - pondr
		+	;;It's mentioned that she collapsed from pneumonia earlier, but that doesn't mean that what she's suffering from here is pneumonia. That could have been an unspecificed later date, a different case. They described her as sickly when they kicked her out, as in, weak or prone to illness(though you changed that to just plain ill) so getting more than one sickness isn't out of the question.
	How could that man throw a woman in that condition out into the cold?[wvl]		How could that man throw a woman in that condition out into the cold?[wvl]
	;;and the "traditional" treatment for tuberculosis is warm weather because the cold is bad... - pondr		;;and the "traditional" treatment for tuberculosis is warm weather because the cold is bad... - pondr
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-	[nm t="ユキ" s=yuk_7779]「I know revenge won't bring my mother back from the dead. But it might bring me back from the brink of Hell. ~~Heh, then again, I'm sure I was damned the very moment I thought~~ of revenge as a salvation.」[wvl]	+	[nm t="ユキ" s=yuk_7779]「I know revenge won't bring my mother back from the dead. But it might bring me back from the brink of Hell. Once you start thinking of revenge as a form of salvation, there's no going back.」[wvl]
	;;[nm t="ユキ" s=yuk_7779]「復讐が問題の解決にならないことは知っているわ。でもね、救いにはなるのよ。復讐こそが唯一の救いだと思い込んでしまったら、もうあとには引けないわ」[wvl]		;;[nm t="ユキ" s=yuk_7779]「復讐が問題の解決にならないことは知っているわ。でもね、救いにはなるのよ。復讐こそが唯一の救いだと思い込んでしまったら、もうあとには引けないわ」[wvl]
		+	;;I like the colorfulness, but the casualness of the last line and "I was damned" doesn't quite capture "can no longer turn back" very well, it just feels like it's cool a line but without the actual intended susbstance to back it up, so it doesn't seem to work very well as a response to Mizuha's pleas to stop.
	As if to punctuate the end of her thought, the phone rang. [l]Yuki quickly drew in a breath and exhaled before answering.[wvl]		As if to punctuate the end of her thought, the phone rang. [l]Yuki quickly drew in a breath and exhaled before answering.[wvl]
	;;　直後、着信があった。[l]ユキはひと息ついて、応答した。[wvl]		;;　直後、着信があった。[l]ユキはひと息ついて、応答した。[wvl]
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	[nm t="ユキ" s=yuk_7795]「The villagers had always been a bunch of shits to us, so it was impossible for me to run a thorough investigation in later years. In any case, thanks to our house being burned down, Mom's health got a lot worse. Do you know what that means?」[np]		[nm t="ユキ" s=yuk_7795]「The villagers had always been a bunch of shits to us, so it was impossible for me to run a thorough investigation in later years. In any case, thanks to our house being burned down, Mom's health got a lot worse. Do you know what that means?」[np]
	;;[nm t="ユキ" s=yuk_7795]「あのときは、村の人もわたしたちに冷たかったから、ろくに調べもなかったわ。家がなくなったおかげで、母さんの病状も悪化した。この意味がわかる？」[np]		;;[nm t="ユキ" s=yuk_7795]「あのときは、村の人もわたしたちに冷たかったから、ろくに調べもなかったわ。家がなくなったおかげで、母さんの病状も悪化した。この意味がわかる？」[np]
		+	;;more like the villagers all hated them so the police didn't bother putting any effort into the investigation.

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	;;that reminds me... what does "hane" mean in katahane (as in the game title on the sidebar 2 spots below ours)? If it were in kanji rather than katakana I'd look it up myself, but it's not v.v - pondr		;;that reminds me... what does "hane" mean in katahane (as in the game title on the sidebar 2 spots below ours)? If it were in kanji rather than katakana I'd look it up myself, but it's not v.v - pondr
	;;actually, if it's 羽 like the ha in Mizuha's name, then I looked that up. - pondr		;;actually, if it's 羽 like the ha in Mizuha's name, then I looked that up. - pondr
		+	;;This line got turned too sarcastic. Not much point in dividing it into legitmate/side jobs and bonus should be turned back more towards something being successful or something beneficial in the long run.

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-	I made ~~promises I knew I couldn't follow through on~~.[np]	+	I just made up some bullshit, but it seemed to do the job just nicely.[np]
	;;でたらめをしゃべったが、効果はあった。[np]		;;でたらめをしゃべったが、効果はあった。[np]
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-	~~Seemed to do the job well enough, though.[np]~~

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	;;宇佐美が携帯電話を片手に、理事長の肩をつかんだ。[np]		;;宇佐美が携帯電話を片手に、理事長の肩をつかんだ。[np]
	;;yeah I know yuki is supposed to hear her but it just works better and seems more realistic. and it doesn't mess anything up, yuki still heard her say "wait" - pondr		;;yeah I know yuki is supposed to hear her but it just works better and seems more realistic. and it doesn't mess anything up, yuki still heard her say "wait" - pondr
		+	;;I disagree, Yuki is noticably perturbed at Haru's suggestion(though I guess that got watered down on line 331), one vague 'wait' just doesn't adequately explain that reaction.

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-	[nm t="ユキ" s=yuk_7806]「Haru... what ~~are~~ you doing?」[np]	+	[nm t="ユキ" s=yuk_7806]「Haru... what do you think you're doing?」[np]
	;;[nm t="ユキ" s=yuk_7806]「ハル……なんのつもり？」[np]		;;[nm t="ユキ" s=yuk_7806]「ハル……なんのつもり？」[np]

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-	[nm t="ハル" s=har_9026]「I can~~'t afford to make this trade. It's something for nothing~~.」[np]	+	[nm t="ハル" s=har_9026]「Yes, that is why I can not give you the director.」[np]
	;;[nm t="ハル" s=har_9026]「だからこそ、理事長をそちらに行かせるわけにはいかない」[np]		;;[nm t="ハル" s=har_9026]「だからこそ、理事長をそちらに行かせるわけにはいかない」[np]
		+	;;Adding the 'it's something for nothing' here seems to me like it kind of gives the impression of "I can't make that trade because it's unequal" which isn't necessarily the point. So, eh, changed it for now. The exact logic behind WHY she can't make it is explained in the next couple lines anyway, no need to go out of your way to over explain

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-	She can't kill Shiratori, but she can kill the Director~~... it makes sense~~.[np]	+	I see... She can't kill Shiratori, but she can kill the Director.[np]
	;;白鳥は殺せないが、理事長は殺せる……そういうことか。[np]		;;白鳥は殺せないが、理事長は殺せる……そういうことか。[np]
		+	;;technically an epiphany so, just wanted to make it more epiphanylike.

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	Tokita's cruelty manifested itself in Shiratori's gasps and sobs.[np]		Tokita's cruelty manifested itself in Shiratori's gasps and sobs.[np]
	;;酷薄な時田と、悲嘆にあえぐ白鳥。[np]		;;酷薄な時田と、悲嘆にあえぐ白鳥。[np]
-		+	;;gasping in grief, heh. I know you want to change it, but sobbing is overdoing it since uh, she just clapped her hands in front of her and she's surprised, you're not going to sob from that.

	@chr c=haru_d_se_22c_b		@chr c=haru_d_se_22c_b

Katahane

2010-09-07T02:32:46Z

Updates: forgot to add this back >_>

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	'''4 September, 2010:''' Well it's a bit too late(almost 2 weeks) but welcome Aaeru to the team!! Well, we also have a shadow editor who has been with us for quite a while doesn't want to reveal herself too tho ;p, hope she does soon. With Aaeru's help, our raw translation progress had managed to surpass 50% Hurray! Half more to go. --[[User:Yeah321\|Yeah321]] 05:49, 4 September 2010 (CDT)		'''4 September, 2010:''' Well it's a bit too late(almost 2 weeks) but welcome Aaeru to the team!! Well, we also have a shadow editor who has been with us for quite a while doesn't want to reveal herself too tho ;p, hope she does soon. With Aaeru's help, our raw translation progress had managed to surpass 50% Hurray! Half more to go. --[[User:Yeah321\|Yeah321]] 05:49, 4 September 2010 (CDT)

-	As an aside, due to the irregular order of translation there likely won't be an 'official' partial patch -[[User:I failed jp302\|I failed jp302]]	+	As an aside, due to the irregular order of translation there likely won't be an 'official' partial patch, but you can use the patch builder below and create your own - it's easy! Then please report any errors you encounter and help us QC. -[[User:I failed jp302\|I failed jp302]]

	'''8 August, 2010:''' Chapter Shirohane 1 Translation done --[[User:Yeah321\|yeah321]]		'''8 August, 2010:''' Chapter Shirohane 1 Translation done --[[User:Yeah321\|yeah321]]

Talk:Katahane

2010-09-07T02:26:20Z

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	::Well, I just fixed one possible error, though this one happened after the script asked whether to make a Literal or Natural patch so I'm not sure if it's the same one Yeah321 got. I dunno, it runs for me on Python 3.1.2. ~_~ -[[User:I failed jp302\|I failed jp302]] 21:24, 6 September 2010 (CDT)		::Well, I just fixed one possible error, though this one happened after the script asked whether to make a Literal or Natural patch so I'm not sure if it's the same one Yeah321 got. I dunno, it runs for me on Python 3.1.2. ~_~ -[[User:I failed jp302\|I failed jp302]] 21:24, 6 September 2010 (CDT)
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		+	:::sorry, I just forgot to put the scenario1.arc in the same folder as the patch builder... --[[User:Yeah321\|Yeah321]] 21:26, 6 September 2010 (CDT)

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Talk:Katahane

2010-09-07T02:24:08Z

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	:I actually can't get the patch_build to work now, it had worked when I first tried it when it was made by jp302, but now it seems like it doesn't work for me anymore. When I clicked the patch build(python file) the window pops up then closes almost instantly. --[[User:Yeah321\|Yeah321]] 21:13, 6 September 2010 (CDT)		:I actually can't get the patch_build to work now, it had worked when I first tried it when it was made by jp302, but now it seems like it doesn't work for me anymore. When I clicked the patch build(python file) the window pops up then closes almost instantly. --[[User:Yeah321\|Yeah321]] 21:13, 6 September 2010 (CDT)
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		+	::Well, I just fixed one possible error, though this one happened after the script asked whether to make a Literal or Natural patch so I'm not sure if it's the same one Yeah321 got. I dunno, it runs for me on Python 3.1.2. ~_~ -[[User:I failed jp302\|I failed jp302]] 21:24, 6 September 2010 (CDT)

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Katahane:sr046b.txt

2010-09-07T02:23:13Z

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	<$119F> セロ「そうそう簡単には、アイディアも浮かばないよ」=セロ「Ideas don't come up that easily you know.」		<$119F> セロ「そうそう簡単には、アイディアも浮かばないよ」=セロ「Ideas don't come up that easily you know.」
	<$11FC> v03wa1368=		<$11FC> v03wa1368=
-	<$121A> ワカバ「力抜いて、かるーく考えてくれたらいいの」=ワカバ「Relax and just think about ~~light and easy stuff~~.」	+	<$121A> ワカバ「力抜いて、かるーく考えてくれたらいいの」=ワカバ「Relax and just think about it lightly.」
	<$1275> v03wa1369=		<$1275> v03wa1369=
	<$1293> ワカバ「――たとえば。クリスティナ姫とシュエスタが、どれぐらい=ワカバ「―For example, things like how intimate Princess Christina and the Schwester is.」		<$1293> ワカバ「――たとえば。クリスティナ姫とシュエスタが、どれぐらい=ワカバ「―For example, things like how intimate Princess Christina and the Schwester is.」

File:Patch build.zip

2010-09-07T02:21:15Z

uploaded a new version of "[[File:Patch build.zip]]" Now python 2 friendly, I hope

Katahane:sr046b.txt

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	<$06CE> ワカバ「あのね、セロ。これは気分転換も兼ねているの」=ワカバ「You know, Cero. This can also do as a change of mood..」		<$06CE> ワカバ「あのね、セロ。これは気分転換も兼ねているの」=ワカバ「You know, Cero. This can also do as a change of mood..」
	<$072D> v03wa1363=		<$072D> v03wa1363=
-	<$074B> ワカバ「――ずーっとひとりでお話を考えているとね、正直煮詰まる=ワカバ「―I've been thinking of things alone all this while, and honestly, there are many things that I ~~could finally draw~~ a conclusion on.」	+	<$074B> ワカバ「――ずーっとひとりでお話を考えているとね、正直煮詰まる=ワカバ「―I've been thinking of things alone all this while, and honestly, there are many things that I'm close to a conclusion on.」
	BR @ $0792		BR @ $0792
	<$079A> ことも多いのよ」=		<$079A> ことも多いのよ」=

Katahane:sr005.txt

2010-09-07T02:14:39Z

Looks like the lines copier had a bug

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	<$39DC> でも、そこから先はチンプンカンプン。=But I didn't understand it in the first place...		<$39DC> でも、そこから先はチンプンカンプン。=But I didn't understand it in the first place...
	<$3A41> v03wa0238=		<$3A41> v03wa0238=
-	<$3A5F> ワカバ「……何だろう？=~~ワカバ「~~...What could it be? ~~I wonder...~~」	+	<$3A5F> ワカバ「……何だろう？=「...What could it be? Hey, what is it?」
-	<$3A89> ねぇ、なぁーに？」=~~「...What could it be? I wonder...」~~	+	<$3A89> ねぇ、なぁーに？」=-
	BR @ $3AB8		BR @ $3AB8
	<$3AC0> それなりに考えてみたけど、見当がつかない。=Even after giving it some thought, I had no idea.		<$3AC0> それなりに考えてみたけど、見当がつかない。=Even after giving it some thought, I had no idea.

Talk:Katahane

2010-09-07T02:13:53Z

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	On a different note, I wouldn't mind QCing as I play but I can't use the translated version for some reason. I have the SR files and added them to the scenario file but when I ran the actual game, crashed after displaying the first line, which was in Japanese. Strange thing is, I was able to translate the in game menu options and get them to display in English in exactly the same way I tried to use the translated files. I'll try again on the weekend, right now I'm reading off Notepad... -[[User:Solarnis\|Solarnis]] 07:44, 6 September 2010 (CDT)		On a different note, I wouldn't mind QCing as I play but I can't use the translated version for some reason. I have the SR files and added them to the scenario file but when I ran the actual game, crashed after displaying the first line, which was in Japanese. Strange thing is, I was able to translate the in game menu options and get them to display in English in exactly the same way I tried to use the translated files. I'll try again on the weekend, right now I'm reading off Notepad... -[[User:Solarnis\|Solarnis]] 07:44, 6 September 2010 (CDT)
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		+	:I actually can't get the patch_build to work now, it had worked when I first tried it when it was made by jp302, but now it seems like it doesn't work for me anymore. When I clicked the patch build(python file) the window pops up then closes almost instantly. --[[User:Yeah321\|Yeah321]] 21:13, 6 September 2010 (CDT)

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R11:Shortcut

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	# a25: ココロ編５日目%N“怯える存在、怯えられる存在”%Nから開始します		# a25: ココロ編５日目%N“怯える存在、怯えられる存在”%Nから開始します
-	a25: Start from%NKokoro Chapter: Day 5,%N"~~Frightens~~ and Is Frightened"	+	a25: Start from%NKokoro Chapter: Day 5,%N"Frightener and Frightened"

	# a64: ココロ編６日目%N“せめてもの幸福”%Nから開始します		# a64: ココロ編６日目%N“せめてもの幸福”%Nから開始します

Talk:Katahane:sr005.txt

2010-09-07T02:07:27Z

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	-[[User:Solarnis\|Solarnis]] 20:49, 6 September 2010 (CDT)		-[[User:Solarnis\|Solarnis]] 20:49, 6 September 2010 (CDT)
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		+	:fixed, thanks ^^ --[[User:Yeah321\|Yeah321]] 21:07, 6 September 2010 (CDT)

Katahane:sr005.txt

2010-09-07T02:06:54Z

fixed

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	<$171B> v03wa0213=		<$171B> v03wa0213=
	<$1739> ワカバ「（――考えて、私）」=ワカバ「(―Um... now what...?)」		<$1739> ワカバ「（――考えて、私）」=ワカバ「(―Um... now what...?)」
-	<$176C> 「……何だろう？ねぇ、なぁーに？」=	+	<$176C> 「……何だろう？ねぇ、なぁーに？」=「...What could it be? Hey, what is it?」
	<$1795> 「……ふたりの今後について、とか？」=「...About the future?」		<$1795> 「……ふたりの今後について、とか？」=「...About the future?」
	<$17BE> 「……夏休みの予定について、とか？」=「...About our plans for the summer break?」		<$17BE> 「……夏休みの予定について、とか？」=「...About our plans for the summer break?」

Katahane:sr046b.txt

2010-09-07T02:02:59Z

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2010-09-07T01:49:45Z

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<$176C> 「……何だろう？ねぇ、なぁーに？」 is untranslated. My limited Japanese says... 'What could it be? Hey, tell me~!'

-[[User:Solarnis|Solarnis]] 20:49, 6 September 2010 (CDT)

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	STR_001f: '\5{1,7}【？？】\N「えっと……、\4{5}確か……\4{5}シーフードピザを注文した人\N達……\4{5}\4{5}だよね？」\P\E\5{0,2}彼女は、お昼にピザの配達に来た子だった。\P\E'		STR_001f: '\5{1,7}【？？】\N「えっと……、\4{5}確か……\4{5}シーフードピザを注文した人\N達……\4{5}\4{5}だよね？」\P\E\5{0,2}彼女は、お昼にピザの配達に来た子だった。\P\E'

-	STR_001f: '\5{1,7}【???】\N"Umm......\4{5}you're......\4{5}the people who ordered the seafood pizza......\N \4{5}\4{~~5right~~?"\P\E\5{0,2}She the delivery girl who gave us the pizza for lunch.\P\E'	+	STR_001f: '\5{1,7}【???】\N"Umm......\4{5}you're......\4{5}the people who ordered the seafood pizza......\N \4{5}\4{5}right?"\P\E\5{0,2}She the delivery girl who gave us the pizza for lunch.\P\E'

	STR_0020: '\5{0,0}【億彦】\N「え……？　\4{5}あ、あぁ、その節はどうも……」\P\E\5{0,2}億彦もようやく気づいたようで、少し引きつった笑顔\Nを浮かべた。\P\E\5{0,2}あの時、悪意はない（？）とは言え嘘をついていたも\Nのだから、バツが悪いのだろう。\P\E'		STR_0020: '\5{0,0}【億彦】\N「え……？　\4{5}あ、あぁ、その節はどうも……」\P\E\5{0,2}億彦もようやく気づいたようで、少し引きつった笑顔\Nを浮かべた。\P\E\5{0,2}あの時、悪意はない（？）とは言え嘘をついていたも\Nのだから、バツが悪いのだろう。\P\E'

Talk:Idolmaster SP

2010-09-07T01:43:04Z

Reviving translation efforts?:

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	- [[User:Tilus\|Tilus]] 01:22, 7 July 2010 (UTC)		- [[User:Tilus\|Tilus]] 01:22, 7 July 2010 (UTC)
		+
		+	Just did a recount, Haruka has 46 scripts remaining, a lot of them are partially done though.
		+	9 scripts of Haruka's are partially completed, meaning 37 have yet to be started on.
		+	--[[User:Swiftnissity\|Swiftnissity]] 20:43, 6 September 2010 (CDT)

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Idolmaster SP:PS

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	STR_0010: '\5{1,4}【優夏】\N「何で私が\Nそんなの受けなきゃなんないのよ……！」\P\E\5{0,0}【誠】\N「優夏のことじゃねえよ――アレ？　遙は？」\P\E'		STR_0010: '\5{1,4}【優夏】\N「何で私が\Nそんなの受けなきゃなんないのよ……！」\P\E\5{0,0}【誠】\N「優夏のことじゃねえよ――アレ？　遙は？」\P\E'

-	STR_0010: '\5{1,4}【Yuka】\N"What did I do\to deserve such a thing......!?"\P\E\5{0,0}【Makoto】\N"Not you, Yuka――Huh? Where's Haruka?"\P\E'	+	STR_0010: '\5{1,4}【Yuka】\N"What did I do to deserve such a thing......!?"\P\E\5{0,0}【Makoto】\N"Not you, Yuka――Huh? Where's Haruka?"\P\E'

	STR_0011: '\5{0,2}遙の姿が見えなくなっていた。\P\N見回すと……\4{f}いた。\P\Nとっくにテニスコートの外だ。\P\E\5{0,0}【誠】\N「優夏。ちょっと、ここ頼む」\P\E'		STR_0011: '\5{0,2}遙の姿が見えなくなっていた。\P\N見回すと……\4{f}いた。\P\Nとっくにテニスコートの外だ。\P\E\5{0,0}【誠】\N「優夏。ちょっと、ここ頼む」\P\E'

Talk:Katahane:sr002.txt

2010-09-07T01:29:53Z

Created page with "<$48DC> uses the words 'Embarrassed by her faux pas'. Wouldn't it be easier to read and more natural to read if you used something like 'Embarrassed by her slip up'? I don't thin..."

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<$48DC> uses the words 'Embarrassed by her faux pas'. Wouldn't it be easier to read and more natural to read if you used something like 'Embarrassed by her slip up'? I don't think I've ever heard a teenager use the words 'faux pas' before... outside of Advanced/Extension English or Drama of course.

-[[User:Solarnis|Solarnis]] 20:29, 6 September 2010 (CDT)

Talk:Katahane

2010-09-07T01:28:31Z

Quality Checkers:

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	::Regarding the python error... I used Python 3.1.2 to run the file but it seems like it doesn't like me. Oh well, it doesn't matter that much. -[[User:Solarnis\|Solarnis]] 01:50, 6 September 2010 (CDT)		::Regarding the python error... I used Python 3.1.2 to run the file but it seems like it doesn't like me. Oh well, it doesn't matter that much. -[[User:Solarnis\|Solarnis]] 01:50, 6 September 2010 (CDT)

-	Not sure where to put this but... in SR002, <$48DC> uses the words 'Embarrassed by her faux pas'. Wouldn't it be easier to read and more natural to read if you used something like 'Embarrassed by her slip up'?	+	On a different note, I wouldn't mind QCing as I play but I can't use the translated version for some reason. I have the SR files and added them to the scenario file but when I ran the actual game, crashed after displaying the first line, which was in Japanese. Strange thing is, I was able to translate the in game menu options and get them to display in English in exactly the same way I tried to use the translated files. I'll try again on the weekend, right now I'm reading off Notepad... -[[User:Solarnis\|Solarnis]] 07:44, 6 September 2010 (CDT)
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-	~~In the future I'll put this sort of thing on the discussion page of the file.~~	+
-		+
-	On a different note, I wouldn't mind QCing as I play but I can't use the translated version for some reason. ~~Something stuffed up~~ when I ran the game ~~and it~~ crashed. I'll try again on the weekend, right now I'm reading off Notepad... -[[User:Solarnis\|Solarnis]] 07:44, 6 September 2010 (CDT)	+

	===Image Editors===		===Image Editors===

Osananajimi wa Daitouryou:01 com c1 002 01.ks

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	<pre>【雪乃】『新本のみなさん。わたし達はここまでやって来ました。しかしまだ、たくさんの課題が残されています』		<pre>【雪乃】『新本のみなさん。わたし達はここまでやって来ました。しかしまだ、たくさんの課題が残されています』
-	People of Nippon. We have come all the way here, and yet we still have many matters to take care of.	+	People of Nippon. We have come all the way here, and yet, we still have many matters to take care of.

	【雪乃】『だから今日、自ら問いかけてください』		【雪乃】『だから今日、自ら問いかけてください』
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	【純一郎】「探し物は見つかった？　鞄の中も机の中も探したけれど見つからない。そんな顔してるけど」		【純一郎】「探し物は見つかった？　鞄の中も机の中も探したけれど見つからない。そんな顔してるけど」
-	Did you find what you were looking for? You look like, 'I searched inside the bag and the desk, but I still can't find it.'	+	Did you find what you were looking for? You look like, "I searched inside the bag and the desk, but I still can't find it."

	【女性スタッフ】「一緒に踊る気はありませんよ。まだまだ探すつもりですから」		【女性スタッフ】「一緒に踊る気はありませんよ。まだまだ探すつもりですから」

Osananajimi wa Daitouryou:01 com c1 001 01.ks

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	【エル/？？？】『モノポールドライブシステム、ダウン。現在、高度１２０００。姿勢制御不能、急速降下中』		【エル/？？？】『モノポールドライブシステム、ダウン。現在、高度１２０００。姿勢制御不能、急速降下中』
-	Monopole Drive System down. Present altitude at 12,000. Attitude control impossible: ~~currently~~ in rapid descent.	+	Monopole Drive System down. Present altitude at 12,000. Attitude control impossible: Currently in rapid descent.
	//[Annabella] 姿勢 is しせい, which is not altitude, but attitude (relative pitch, yaw, and roll of the spacecraft).		//[Annabella] 姿勢 is しせい, which is not altitude, but attitude (relative pitch, yaw, and roll of the spacecraft).

Talk:Katahane:sr003.txt

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-	<$015C> ワカバ「ココは朝ご飯、食べたの？」=ワカバ「Have you eaten breakfast, Coco?」	+	<$015C> ワカバ「ココは朝ご飯、食べたの？」=ワカバ「Have you eaten breakfast, Coco?」<br>
	<$01C7> ココ「あ、い」=ココ「E, ah―」		<$01C7> ココ「あ、い」=ココ「E, ah―」

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	:Sure.		:Sure.

-		+	<$7601> セロ「もしかして、ココを送ってきてくれたの？」=セロ「Did you come to walk Coco home?」<br>
-	<$7601> セロ「もしかして、ココを送ってきてくれたの？」=セロ「Did you come to walk Coco home?」	+	//Note: editing. A bit less long-winded<br>
-	//Note: editing. A bit less long-winded	+
	//jp302's note: stock translations of もしかして bug me, I'll probably want to avoid them even if it's slightly inaccurate		//jp302's note: stock translations of もしかして bug me, I'll probably want to avoid them even if it's slightly inaccurate

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	:'Could it be' was the stock translation I was trying to avoid. :p I don't know, it just doesn't sound natural to me in most cases.		:'Could it be' was the stock translation I was trying to avoid. :p I don't know, it just doesn't sound natural to me in most cases.
		+	:: Ahh never mind then lol. I misread what you intended the note to mean.

-		+	Found out how to do line breaks, Mediawiki uses br tags.
-	~~Also...~~ how do ~~you put~~ line breaks ~~into this webpage? Having it is a massive line like that isn't how I wanted it to come out?~~	+

	-[[User:Solarnis\|Solarnis]] 08:03, 6 September 2010 (CDT)		-[[User:Solarnis\|Solarnis]] 08:03, 6 September 2010 (CDT)

	:Adding an extra line is the easiest way. Don't worry about it though, it looks normal when you edit the page. -[[User:I failed jp302\|I failed jp302]] 11:07, 6 September 2010 (CDT)		:Adding an extra line is the easiest way. Don't worry about it though, it looks normal when you edit the page. -[[User:I failed jp302\|I failed jp302]] 11:07, 6 September 2010 (CDT)

The Devil on G-String:gk07.ks

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	They can't prove anything, of course, but rumors are running rampant all through the press, both online and in hard copy formats.[np]		They can't prove anything, of course, but rumors are running rampant all through the press, both online and in hard copy formats.[np]
	;;決して公になることはないが、週刊誌やインターネット上では周知の事実として噂されていることだった。[np]		;;決して公になることはないが、週刊誌やインターネット上では周知の事実として噂されていることだった。[np]
		+	;;this is supposed to be elaborating on the previous sentence. It's never made official, but rumors assuming it as established truth would appear in weekly magazines and on the internet. Also, until now in the previous line should probably be cut. Since this article is about her connection through Kyousuke, and page 10 is specifically speaking about her connection as a daughter of the leader.

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	I violently threw the magazine into the rubbish bin and began to brainstorm a damage control plan.[np]		I violently threw the magazine into the rubbish bin and began to brainstorm a damage control plan.[np]
	;;週刊誌を投げ捨てて、今後の対策を考えた。[np]		;;週刊誌を投げ捨てて、今後の対策を考えた。[np]
		+	;;lol look at this damage control butthurt fag. sorry I go to LL too much

	;ev_maou_04b		;ev_maou_04b
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-	[nm t="花音" s=kan_7641]~~「For cryin' out loud, who~~ the hell does she think she's fooling when she jumps so freaking close to me?」[np]	+	[nm t="花音" s=kan_7641]「Who the hell does she think she's fooling when she jumps so freaking close to me?」[np]
	;;[nm t="花音" s=kan_7641]「それが、わたしの近くでジャンプの練習するなんておかしいじゃない」[np]		;;[nm t="花音" s=kan_7641]「それが、わたしの近くでジャンプの練習するなんておかしいじゃない」[np]

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	;;自信がないからこそ、おれに食ってかかってくる。[np]		;;自信がないからこそ、おれに食ってかかってくる。[np]
	;;Kyousuke is a pro man. He knows what's up, G. Ten bucks says he takes it well and rolls with it. - pondr 1st shift (labeled 2nd time around)		;;Kyousuke is a pro man. He knows what's up, G. Ten bucks says he takes it well and rolls with it. - pondr 1st shift (labeled 2nd time around)
		+	;;What's with the unnecessary addition, the point is that she's snappy because of her lack of confidence, she probably would have been snappy to anyone in that state.

	@chr c=kanon_b_sic_02c_b		@chr c=kanon_b_sic_02c_b
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	[nm t="京介"]「Kanon, you're selfish as hell, but you've never been one to lie. And you've always swallowed your pride when it comes to skating.」[np]		[nm t="京介"]「Kanon, you're selfish as hell, but you've never been one to lie. And you've always swallowed your pride when it comes to skating.」[np]
	;;[nm t="京介"]「花音、お前はわがままだけど、これまでたいした嘘はつかなかった。スケートに対してプライドを持って臨んでいた」[np]		;;[nm t="京介"]「花音、お前はわがままだけど、これまでたいした嘘はつかなかった。スケートに対してプライドを持って臨んでいた」[np]
		+	;;swallowed is the opposite of deal with it with pride

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	[nm t="京介"]「Then pretend like you do, okay?」[np]		[nm t="京介"]「Then pretend like you do, okay?」[np]
	;;[nm t="京介"]「それを行動に移すんだ」[np]		;;[nm t="京介"]「それを行動に移すんだ」[np]
		+	;;note this line is just a continuation of what he said in 110, as if he payed no attention to Kanon's response(which is what prompts what Kanon said in 113). You know you're in the wrong, so show that in your actions.

User:99.58.185.39

2010-09-06T23:58:43Z

blocked [[99.58.185.39 (Talk)]] with an expiry time of infinite (anonymous users only, account creation disabled) Inserting nonsense/gibberish into pages

User talk:Krdskrm

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R11 Readme Compilation:

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	I mentioned on the talk page that I was making a readme for the game, which will be added in an additional folder in the patch. I'm in the midst of finalizing my contributions to it now, so if you wouldn't mind sending me the items which you wanna include, then I'll put the file together. You can reach me on IRC as manjoume_fumi, or I can provide my e-mail address if preferable. --[[User:the_paper\|the_paper]] 04:14, 6 September 2010 (CDT)		I mentioned on the talk page that I was making a readme for the game, which will be added in an additional folder in the patch. I'm in the midst of finalizing my contributions to it now, so if you wouldn't mind sending me the items which you wanna include, then I'll put the file together. You can reach me on IRC as manjoume_fumi, or I can provide my e-mail address if preferable. --[[User:the_paper\|the_paper]] 04:14, 6 September 2010 (CDT)
		+	:Did you get the file? If not, I'll send it through e-mail. Thanks.--[[User:Krdskrm\|Krdskrm]] 18:28, 6 September 2010 (CDT)

Talk:Kizuato

2010-09-06T22:55:07Z

Alive?: new section

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	:I'm wondering this myself		:I'm wondering this myself
	:[[User:Spin569874123\|Spin569874123]] 06:31, 29 May 2010 (UTC)		:[[User:Spin569874123\|Spin569874123]] 06:31, 29 May 2010 (UTC)
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		+	== Alive? ==
		+
		+	Is this project still alive? Cuz there hasn't been any updates since June.

N7:Exe strings

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Katahane:sr046a.txt

2010-09-06T21:20:15Z

Undo revision 66627 by 99.58.185.39 (talk) thanks for the advice, I'll try to do better

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Katahane:sr046a.txt

2010-09-06T21:06:01Z

good writing

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Katahane:sr046a.txt

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	<$3F45> ベル「………………」=ベル「......」		<$3F45> ベル「………………」=ベル「......」
	<$3FA0> v00an1323=		<$3FA0> v00an1323=
-	<$3FBE> アンジ「や、やっぱり、想像と違って……ダメだったかしら？」=~~アンジ「D~~-~~does~~ it ~~not suit me like~~ what you ~~had~~ imagined?」	+	<$3FBE> アンジ「や、やっぱり、想像と違って……ダメだったかしら？」=アンジ「I-is it different then what you imagined? Does it not suit me?」
	<$4023> 彼女の言葉に、ワタシは目一杯首を横に振る。=Her words made me shook my head with all my might.		<$4023> 彼女の言葉に、ワタシは目一杯首を横に振る。=Her words made me shook my head with all my might.
	<$4064> v01be1072=		<$4064> v01be1072=

Katahane

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	\|Shirohane 2		\|Shirohane 2
-	\|~~5868~~/11586	+	\|6199/11586
-	\|50~~.65~~	+	\|53.50
-	\|~~273~~.15/541.61	+	\|289.60/541.61
-	\|50.43	+	\|53.47
	\|-		\|-
	\|'''Total'''		\|'''Total'''
-	\|'''~~17503~~/32784'''	+	\|'''17834/32784'''
-	\|'''53.39'''	+	\|'''54.40'''
-	\|'''~~805~~.24/1526.08'''	+	\|'''821.68/1526.08'''
-	\|'''52.76'''	+	\|'''53.84'''
	\|-		\|-
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	''[[Katahane:sr044.txt\|sr044]]''<br/> <!-- 75 lines -->		''[[Katahane:sr044.txt\|sr044]]''<br/> <!-- 75 lines -->
-	[[Katahane:sr045.txt\|sr045]]<br/> <!-- 118 lines -->	+	''[[Katahane:sr045.txt\|sr045]]''<br/> <!-- 118 lines -->
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	[[Katahane:sr046b.txt\|sr046b]]<br/> <!-- 209 lines -->		[[Katahane:sr046b.txt\|sr046b]]<br/> <!-- 209 lines -->
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Katahane:sr046a.txt

2010-09-06T20:47:54Z

done uagh,

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Princess Maker 5/Picture Progress

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	nearly an hour, the leader of the local group "Zero Boys" won out.		nearly an hour, the leader of the local group "Zero Boys" won out.

-	Y, who witnessed the showdown:	+	Mr. Y, who witnessed the showdown:
	"Well y'know, it was amazin'!		"Well y'know, it was amazin'!
	The two just kept laughin' and hittin' each other.		The two just kept laughin' and hittin' each other.

Talk:Princess Maker 5

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	:'''tt11:''' Hey, at least I didn't have to do it, I'm pretty sure Vanilla Ice would sound more authentic than me. On that topic: "''Y, who witnessed the showdown:''". I'm kind of confused about what this is, is it still part of the reporter's writing, or the biker talking? I don't get what the Y in there is supposed to be. --[[User:Ephyon\|Ephyon]] 10:50, 6 September 2010 (CDT)		:'''tt11:''' Hey, at least I didn't have to do it, I'm pretty sure Vanilla Ice would sound more authentic than me. On that topic: "''Y, who witnessed the showdown:''". I'm kind of confused about what this is, is it still part of the reporter's writing, or the biker talking? I don't get what the Y in there is supposed to be. --[[User:Ephyon\|Ephyon]] 10:50, 6 September 2010 (CDT)
		+	It's like a "codename" or whatnot to protect the identity of the person talking, like how tt07 had "Citizen A". However, unlike tt07, tt11 doesn't describe the speaker at all (although it's obvious what he is based on his dialogue), it simply says that he witnessed the confrontation. --[[User:Arlen\|Arlen]] 12:05, 6 September 2010 (CDT)

	== September 5 ==		== September 5 ==

Katahane:sr002.txt

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	<$485B> v03wa0046=		<$485B> v03wa0046=
	<$4879> ワカバ「とっ、とにかく。はい、ライトはココに牛乳を渡す」=ワカバ「A, anyway. Light, give Coco her milk.」		<$4879> ワカバ「とっ、とにかく。はい、ライトはココに牛乳を渡す」=ワカバ「A, anyway. Light, give Coco her milk.」
-	<$48DC> バツが悪かったのか、ねーちゃんはオレから瓶を奪うようにしてココへと押しつける。=Embarrassed by her ~~faux pas~~, Sis grabbed the bottles from me and pushed them at Coco.	+	<$48DC> バツが悪かったのか、ねーちゃんはオレから瓶を奪うようにしてココへと押しつける。=Embarrassed by her slip-up, Sis grabbed the bottles from me and pushed them at Coco.
-	// ALT=Embarrassed by her ~~faux pas~~, Nee-chan grabbed the bottles from me and pushed them at Coco.	+	// ALT=Embarrassed by her slip-up, Nee-chan grabbed the bottles from me and pushed them at Coco.
	<$4941> そして、ひとりでウンウンと頷き、=And with a firm nod,		<$4941> そして、ひとりでウンウンと頷き、=And with a firm nod,
	<$497E> st03_a00=		<$497E> st03_a00=
	<$49A7> v03wa0047=		<$49A7> v03wa0047=
-	<$49C5> ワカバ「じゃ、行きましょうココ」=ワカバ「Then, let's go, Coco!~~」she started~~ walking out of the shop.	+	<$49C5> ワカバ「じゃ、行きましょうココ」=ワカバ「Then, let's go, Coco!」 she said and began walking out of the shop.
	<$49F8> 店を出て行こうとしていた。=-		<$49F8> 店を出て行こうとしていた。=-
	<$4A29> v05li0053=		<$4A29> v05li0053=

Katahane:sr003.txt

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	<$015C> ワカバ「ココは朝ご飯、食べたの？」=ワカバ「Have you eaten breakfast, Coco?」		<$015C> ワカバ「ココは朝ご飯、食べたの？」=ワカバ「Have you eaten breakfast, Coco?」
	<$01A9> v02co1167=		<$01A9> v02co1167=
-	<$01C7> ココ「あ、い」=~~ココ「E~~, ~~ah―」~~	+	<$01C7> ココ「あ、い」=ココ「Ye, s―」
	<$0200> v03wa0079=		<$0200> v03wa0079=
	<$021E> ワカバ「そっか。……ってことは、相当な早起きさんね」=ワカバ「I see. ......You're an early riser, aren't you.」		<$021E> ワカバ「そっか。……ってことは、相当な早起きさんね」=ワカバ「I see. ......You're an early riser, aren't you.」

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	'''4 September, 2010:''' Well it's a bit too late(almost 2 weeks) but welcome Aaeru to the team!! Well, we also have a shadow editor who has been with us for quite a while doesn't want to reveal herself too tho ;p, hope she does soon. With Aaeru's help, our raw translation progress had managed to surpass 50% Hurray! Half more to go. --[[User:Yeah321\|Yeah321]] 05:49, 4 September 2010 (CDT)		'''4 September, 2010:''' Well it's a bit too late(almost 2 weeks) but welcome Aaeru to the team!! Well, we also have a shadow editor who has been with us for quite a while doesn't want to reveal herself too tho ;p, hope she does soon. With Aaeru's help, our raw translation progress had managed to surpass 50% Hurray! Half more to go. --[[User:Yeah321\|Yeah321]] 05:49, 4 September 2010 (CDT)

-	As an aside, due to the irregular order of translation there likely won't be an 'official' partial patch -[[User:I failed jp302\|I failed jp302]]	+	As an aside, due to the irregular order of translation there likely won't be an 'official' partial patch, but you can use the patch builder below and create your own - it's easy! Then please report any errors you encounter and help us QC. -[[User:I failed jp302\|I failed jp302]]

	'''8 August, 2010:''' Chapter Shirohane 1 Translation done --[[User:Yeah321\|yeah321]]		'''8 August, 2010:''' Chapter Shirohane 1 Translation done --[[User:Yeah321\|yeah321]]

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	STR_0017: '\5{0,2}……オレはしばらくボウ然とその場に立ち尽くしてい\Nた。\P\E\5{0,2}――デジャヴ（既視感）？　\4{5}\4{5}違う……。\P\E\5{0,2}ある現象が起こった後に、それをあたかも以前経験し\Nたことがあるかのごとく錯覚してしまうのがデジャヴ\Nだ。\P\E\5{0,2}これはそういった類のものでは決してない。\P\E\5{0,2}オレは確かに、遙が転ぶ前に遙が転ぶ姿を\N見たんだ。\P\E\5{0,2}遙を抱き起こす前に遙を抱き起こす光景を見たんだ。\P\E\5{0,2}（じゃあ、これは一体……？）\P\E'		STR_0017: '\5{0,2}……オレはしばらくボウ然とその場に立ち尽くしてい\Nた。\P\E\5{0,2}――デジャヴ（既視感）？　\4{5}\4{5}違う……。\P\E\5{0,2}ある現象が起こった後に、それをあたかも以前経験し\Nたことがあるかのごとく錯覚してしまうのがデジャヴ\Nだ。\P\E\5{0,2}これはそういった類のものでは決してない。\P\E\5{0,2}オレは確かに、遙が転ぶ前に遙が転ぶ姿を\N見たんだ。\P\E\5{0,2}遙を抱き起こす前に遙を抱き起こす光景を見たんだ。\P\E\5{0,2}（じゃあ、これは一体……？）\P\E'

-	STR_0017: '\5{0,2}......I stare into space for a short while, standing still.\N \P\E\5{0,2}――Was that deja-vu?\4{5}\4{5}No way......\P\E\5{0,2}Deja-vu is what happens when an event similar to a previous one you've experienced occurs, and you get the illusion you've seen the same event before.\N\ N \P\E\5{0,2}But I've never seen anything like this before.\P\E\5{0,2}I definitely saw Haruka fall before she actually fell for real.\N \P\E\5{0,2}I saw the scene of myself helping Haruka stand up before that really happened too.\P\E\5{0,2}（Then just what the hell is going on......?）\P\E'	+	STR_0017: '\5{0,2}......I stare into space for a short while, standing still.\N \P\E\5{0,2}――Was that deja-vu?\4{5}\4{5}No way......\P\E\5{0,2}Deja-vu is what happens when an event similar to a previous one you've experienced occurs, and you get the illusion you've seen the same event before.\N\N \P\E\5{0,2}But I've never seen anything like this before.\P\E\5{0,2}I definitely saw Haruka fall before she actually fell for real.\N \P\E\5{0,2}I saw the scene of myself helping Haruka stand up before that really happened too.\P\E\5{0,2}（Then just what the hell is going on......?）\P\E'

	STR_0018: '\5{0,2}ふと見上げれば、西の天空が赤黒く燃えていた。\P\N'		STR_0018: '\5{0,2}ふと見上げれば、西の天空が赤黒く燃えていた。\P\N'
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	STR_0035: '\5{1,7}【？？】\N「……う〜ん。とりあえず、みんなＯＫなんだよね？\N」\P\E\5{0,0}【誠】\N「ん？　\4{5}ああ、そうみたいだな」\P\E'		STR_0035: '\5{1,7}【？？】\N「……う〜ん。とりあえず、みんなＯＫなんだよね？\N」\P\E\5{0,0}【誠】\N「ん？　\4{5}ああ、そうみたいだな」\P\E'

-	STR_0035: '\5{1,7}【???】\N"......Right. So does this mean everyone's okay with this?"\N \P\E\5{0,0}【Makoto】\N"Huh?\4{~~5Yeah~~, it seems that way."\P\E'	+	STR_0035: '\5{1,7}【???】\N"......Right. So does this mean everyone's okay with this?"\N \P\E\5{0,0}【Makoto】\N"Huh?\4{5}Yeah, it seems that way."\P\E'

	STR_0036: '\5{0,2}オレの返事に少女は、満足そうな微笑みを\N浮かべる。\P\E'		STR_0036: '\5{0,2}オレの返事に少女は、満足そうな微笑みを\N浮かべる。\P\E'
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	STR_0047: '\5{1,7}【Kurumi】\N「Today, I attracted customers for lunch......because of Kurumi, we're doing really well.....*"\N \P\E\5{0,2}Kurumi goes on, praising herself......\P\E'		STR_0047: '\5{1,7}【Kurumi】\N「Today, I attracted customers for lunch......because of Kurumi, we're doing really well.....*"\N \P\E\5{0,2}Kurumi goes on, praising herself......\P\E'
		+
		+	// TODO: CHECK

	STR_0048: '\5{1,4}【優夏】\N「くるみちゃん、偉いね〜♪」\P\E\5{0,2}優夏はくるみの頭をナデナデした。\P\E'		STR_0048: '\5{1,4}【優夏】\N「くるみちゃん、偉いね〜♪」\P\E\5{0,2}優夏はくるみの頭をナデナデした。\P\E'
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	STR_00a2: '\5{1,6}【沙紀】\N「ちょっとどういうことなのよ、それ！？」\P\E\5{0,2}ジロッと沙紀は億彦を見た。\4{5}\N億彦は、ピタッと足を止めた。\4{5}\4{5}\Nコイツ、逃げようとしてたな。\P'		STR_00a2: '\5{1,6}【沙紀】\N「ちょっとどういうことなのよ、それ！？」\P\E\5{0,2}ジロッと沙紀は億彦を見た。\4{5}\N億彦は、ピタッと足を止めた。\4{5}\4{5}\Nコイツ、逃げようとしてたな。\P'

-	STR_00a2: '\5{1,6}【Saki】\N"Just what the hell is the meaning of this!?"\P\E\5{0,2}Saki glares at Okuhiko.\4{5}\NOkuhiko's feet abruptly stop.\4{5}\4{5}\Dammit, he tried to run away?\P'	+	STR_00a2: '\5{1,6}【Saki】\N"Just what the hell is the meaning of this!?"\P\E\5{0,2}Saki glares at Okuhiko.\4{5}\NOkuhiko's feet abruptly stop.\4{5}\4{5}Dammit, he tried to run away?\P'

	STR_00a3: '\5{0,2}\C{1}『いや、だからそれは……』\N\C{2}オレは億彦をかばう気など毛頭なかった\N'		STR_00a3: '\5{0,2}\C{1}『いや、だからそれは……』\N\C{2}オレは億彦をかばう気など毛頭なかった\N'
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	STR_00a8: '\5{1,4}【優夏】\N「沙紀って……\4{5}\Nひょっとして、あの朝倉沙紀さん？」\P\E'		STR_00a8: '\5{1,4}【優夏】\N「沙紀って……\4{5}\Nひょっとして、あの朝倉沙紀さん？」\P\E'

-	STR_00a8: '\5{1,4}【Yuka】\N"Saki......\4{5}\~~Could~~ it be that you're THAT Saki Asakura-san?"\P\E'	+	STR_00a8: '\5{1,4}【Yuka】\N"Saki......\4{5}\NCould it be that you're THAT Saki Asakura-san?"\P\E'

	STR_00a9: '\5{1,6}【沙紀】\N「…………？」\P\E'		STR_00a9: '\5{1,6}【沙紀】\N「…………？」\P\E'
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	STR_00b1: '\5{1,4}【優夏】\N「まさかぁ！　\4{5}大学のゼミ合宿。あの林に囲まれた坂\N道を登って行った所にロッジがあって……」\P\E'		STR_00b1: '\5{1,4}【優夏】\N「まさかぁ！　\4{5}大学のゼミ合宿。あの林に囲まれた坂\N道を登って行った所にロッジがあって……」\P\E'

-	STR_00b1: '\5{1,4}【Yuka】\N"No way! \4{5I'm here for my college's "Seminar Training Camp". I'm staying in a lodge on the top of the hill surrounded by trees......"\N \P\E'	+	STR_00b1: '\5{1,4}【Yuka】\N"No way! \4{5}I'm here for my college's "Seminar Training Camp". I'm staying in a lodge on the top of the hill surrounded by trees......"\N \P\E'

	STR_00b2: '\5{1,6}【沙紀】\N「え？　\4{5}じゃあ、うちの別荘のすぐ近くじゃなぁい？\N」\P\E\5{0,2}突然２人が盛り上がってしまった。\P\E\5{0,2}話を聞くと沙紀は、毎年のようにここの別荘に来てい\Nるらしい。\P\E\5{0,2}今回は『２月の試験休みから、ずっとこの島に来てい\Nる』……そう言っていた。\P\E\5{0,2}大学が始まるまで優雅に滞在するそうだ。\P\N\5{0,2}オレ達とはえらい違いだ。\P\E'		STR_00b2: '\5{1,6}【沙紀】\N「え？　\4{5}じゃあ、うちの別荘のすぐ近くじゃなぁい？\N」\P\E\5{0,2}突然２人が盛り上がってしまった。\P\E\5{0,2}話を聞くと沙紀は、毎年のようにここの別荘に来てい\Nるらしい。\P\E\5{0,2}今回は『２月の試験休みから、ずっとこの島に来てい\Nる』……そう言っていた。\P\E\5{0,2}大学が始まるまで優雅に滞在するそうだ。\P\N\5{0,2}オレ達とはえらい違いだ。\P\E'

	STR_00b2: '\5{1,6}【Saki】\N"Huh? \4{5}So you're nowhere near my villa?"\N\P\E\5{0,2}The two of them suddenly get excited.\P\E\5{0,2}According to Saki, she comes here every year to stay at her villa.\N \P\E\5{0,2}She says this time around, "I've been here on this island ever my final exams ended in February."\N \P\E\5{0,2}She has decided to rest here until her college starts up again.*\P\N\5{0,2}There's a big difference between us.\P\E'		STR_00b2: '\5{1,6}【Saki】\N"Huh? \4{5}So you're nowhere near my villa?"\N\P\E\5{0,2}The two of them suddenly get excited.\P\E\5{0,2}According to Saki, she comes here every year to stay at her villa.\N \P\E\5{0,2}She says this time around, "I've been here on this island ever my final exams ended in February."\N \P\E\5{0,2}She has decided to rest here until her college starts up again.*\P\N\5{0,2}There's a big difference between us.\P\E'
		+
		+	// TODO: CHECK

	STR_00b3: '\5{0,2}そんなことを考えていると、いづみさんが優夏と沙紀\Nに割って入った。\P\E'		STR_00b3: '\5{0,2}そんなことを考えていると、いづみさんが優夏と沙紀\Nに割って入った。\P\E'

-	STR_00b3: '\5{0,2}As I'm thinking about all of this, Izumi-san stands in between Yuka and Saki.\N \P\E'	+	STR_00b3: '\5{0,2}As I'm thinking about all of this, Izumi-san stands in between Yuka and Saki.\N\P\E'

	STR_00b4: '\5{1,8}【いづみ】\N「それじゃ今晩、食事を御馳走してあげましょう。２\N人の再会を祝って♪」\P\E'		STR_00b4: '\5{1,8}【いづみ】\N「それじゃ今晩、食事を御馳走してあげましょう。２\N人の再会を祝って♪」\P\E'
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	STR_00bf: '\5{0,0}【Makoto】\N"Um......"\P\E\5{0,2}I reply with uncertainty.\P\E\5{0,2}On one hand, I feel awkward receiving a meal from people we only just met.*\N \P\E\5{0,2}But if we return to the lodge, all that awaits us is Yuka's murderous cooking.\N \P\E\5{0,2}What should I do......?\P\N\5{0,2}I gaze at Haruka hesitantly.\P\E'		STR_00bf: '\5{0,0}【Makoto】\N"Um......"\P\E\5{0,2}I reply with uncertainty.\P\E\5{0,2}On one hand, I feel awkward receiving a meal from people we only just met.*\N \P\E\5{0,2}But if we return to the lodge, all that awaits us is Yuka's murderous cooking.\N \P\E\5{0,2}What should I do......?\P\N\5{0,2}I gaze at Haruka hesitantly.\P\E'
		+
		+	// TODO: CHECK

	STR_00c0: '\5{0,2}……と、遙はすっと目をそらした。\P\E\5{0,2}……私、いい……。\4{5}\4{5}オレにはそう言っているように思\Nえた。\P\E\5{0,2}それならば……。\Pそこまで思いかけた時……。\P\E'		STR_00c0: '\5{0,2}……と、遙はすっと目をそらした。\P\E\5{0,2}……私、いい……。\4{5}\4{5}オレにはそう言っているように思\Nえた。\P\E\5{0,2}それならば……。\Pそこまで思いかけた時……。\P\E'
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	STR_00ca: '\5{1,6}【沙紀】\N「……そうね。\4{5}\Nなら、そうさせてもらおうかしら……」\P\E'		STR_00ca: '\5{1,6}【沙紀】\N「……そうね。\4{5}\Nなら、そうさせてもらおうかしら……」\P\E'

-	STR_00ca: '\5{1,6}【Saki】\N"......That's true\4{5}\~~Well~~ then, let's stay here and eat......*"\P\E'	+	STR_00ca: '\5{1,6}【Saki】\N"......That's true\4{5}\NWell then, let's stay here and eat......*"\P\E'
		+
		+	// TODO: CHECK

	STR_00cb: '\5{1,4}【優夏】\N「よしっ、決まり♪」\P\E'		STR_00cb: '\5{1,4}【優夏】\N「よしっ、決まり♪」\P\E'
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	STR_00e1: '\5{1,8}【Izumi】\N"Then please excuse me, but are my words of trust alright with you?*" \N\P\E\5{0,0}【Makoto】\N"Of course!"\P\E'		STR_00e1: '\5{1,8}【Izumi】\N"Then please excuse me, but are my words of trust alright with you?*" \N\P\E\5{0,0}【Makoto】\N"Of course!"\P\E'
		+
		+	// TODO CHECK

	STR_00e2: '\5{1,4}【優夏】\N「それじゃあ私も、何かお手伝いしますよ！」\P\E'		STR_00e2: '\5{1,4}【優夏】\N「それじゃあ私も、何かお手伝いしますよ！」\P\E'
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	STR_00e5: '\5{1,4}【Yuka】\N"I'll be Izumi-san's assistant, cooking some of the other things for her......somehow.*"\N \4{5}\P\E\5{0,2}The faces of Okuhiko, Haruka, and I are frozen in terror.\P\E\5{0,0}【Makoto】\N"Y-\4{5}\4{5}You can't do that, Yuka......"\P\E'		STR_00e5: '\5{1,4}【Yuka】\N"I'll be Izumi-san's assistant, cooking some of the other things for her......somehow.*"\N \4{5}\P\E\5{0,2}The faces of Okuhiko, Haruka, and I are frozen in terror.\P\E\5{0,0}【Makoto】\N"Y-\4{5}\4{5}You can't do that, Yuka......"\P\E'
		+
		+	// TODO: CHECK

	STR_00e6: '\5{1,4}【優夏】\N「どうして？」\P'		STR_00e6: '\5{1,4}【優夏】\N「どうして？」\P'
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	STR_00e8: '\5{0,0}【誠】\N「ゆ、\4{5}優夏は、オレと一緒に買い物に行くんだよ」\P\E'		STR_00e8: '\5{0,0}【誠】\N「ゆ、\4{5}優夏は、オレと一緒に買い物に行くんだよ」\P\E'

-	STR_00e8: '\5{0,0}【Makoto】\N"B-\4{~~5Because~~, Yuka and I will go shop together."\P\E'	+	STR_00e8: '\5{0,0}【Makoto】\N"B-\4{5}Because, Yuka and I will go shop together."\P\E'

	STR_00e9: '\5{1,4}【優夏】\N「ちょ、\4{5}ちょっと勝手に決めないでよ、そんなことぉ\N……」\P\E\5{0,0}【誠】\N「いや……\4{5}勝手とか……\4{5}河童とか……\4{5}そういう問題で\Nはなくぅ……」\P\E'		STR_00e9: '\5{1,4}【優夏】\N「ちょ、\4{5}ちょっと勝手に決めないでよ、そんなことぉ\N……」\P\E\5{0,0}【誠】\N「いや……\4{5}勝手とか……\4{5}河童とか……\4{5}そういう問題で\Nはなくぅ……」\P\E'
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	STR_0108: '\5{0,2}She's already gone outside.\P\E\5{0,0}【Makoto】\N"H-Hey, wait for me, Saki............\N san!"\4{5} \P\E\5{0,2}Flustered, I chase after her......\P\E'		STR_0108: '\5{0,2}She's already gone outside.\P\E\5{0,0}【Makoto】\N"H-Hey, wait for me, Saki............\N san!"\4{5} \P\E\5{0,2}Flustered, I chase after her......\P\E'

-	\\ TN: An * means I'm not sure about my translation of that line, and that I'll revise it in the Final Translation.	+	// TN: An * means I'm not sure about my translation of that line, and that I'll revise it in the Final Translation.

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